How's my videos?

[dmcs2014]

I just wanted someones opinion on my videos, like what I could do to improve them. Please and Thank you
Link to my channel - http://www.youtube.com/user/TGWTIT

 

[Turwinkle]

The cuts were good! The music was at the right level I feel! Maybe tighten the ending up a bit. Just a few suggestions I have..just from what I saw!