How is my new video outro?

[imZerin]

its the newest video on my channel (just the outro) dont go easy on me!

its called zerin outro template because i saved the psd for editing down the lind i did not download this picture

 

[JWB]

I like it, but the font for previous video and social networking doesn't appeal to me personally. I don't like how there is almost no distinguishable space between Previous and Video.

All in all, I like it

 

[KdawgCreations]

looks slick and very nice the words "previous" and "social networking" are hard to read not the end of the world but just a heads up but other than that looks pretty nice

 

[imZerin]

I like it, but the font for previous video and social networking doesn't appeal to me personally. I don't like how there is almost no distinguishable space between Previous and Video.

All in all, I like it

do you think i should add more spaces in between the words??

looks slick and very nice the words "previous" and "social networking" are hard to read not the end of the world but just a heads up but other than that looks pretty nice

should i put more spaces between the words??

 

[KdawgCreations]

Change the font completely letters are too close together and the italicized look an't helping either

 

[imZerin]

Change the font completely letters are too close together and the italicized look an't helping either

ok i will edit it and upload a picture[DOUBLEPOST=1371314881,1371314652][/DOUBLEPOST]

Change the font completely letters are too close together and the italicized look an't helping either

simple easy to read bebas neue

 

[KdawgCreations]

that

ok i will edit it and upload a picture[DOUBLEPOST=1371314881,1371314652][/DOUBLEPOST]

simple easy to read bebas neue

works simple and clear to read

 

[OzTalksHw]

I think there's too much time between the beginning and when the actual image flashes onto the screen xP

 

[imZerin]

I think there's too much time between the beginning and when the actual image flashes onto the screen xP

the start is where the music will play while im saying thanks for watching blah blah blah and the end is will idk what