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Turwinkle

Turwinkle

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Hi there everyone! I could use some feedback on my latest installment of my Lets play series called The adventures of Turwinkle, the gnome mage. This is episode forty-one and really where I am with what I have learned with editing and what-not! I have learned quite a bit since episode one and I know I have a long ways to go, but with the fantastic YTtalk community I am looking forward to taking Turwinkle to new heights! (That is not a short joke by the way!;)) Thank you all for helping! You guys rock!:woot2:

[DOUBLEPOST=1370136807,1370135694][/DOUBLEPOST]*Turwinkle taps his foot awaiting a moderator* Come on already! George is getting me all wet and Glenn is ready to go!:O_o2:
 
Just watched your video,

1) Can you get rid of the black bars on the side?
Side note your voice is awesome
2) the commentary was good
I would just work on the visual quality of the video more than anything, you were really great and keeping my attention.
3) You were kind of begging at the end
4) level intro and outro volume to the same as gameplay, was a little bit of a shocker lol

I subbed too
 
Slowlist said:
Just watched your video,

1) Can you get rid of the black bars on the side?
Side note your voice is awesome
2) the commentary was good
I would just work on the visual quality of the video more than anything, you were really great and keeping my attention.
3) You were kind of begging at the end
4) level intro and outro volume to the same as gameplay, was a little bit of a shocker lol

I subbed too
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1)I will work on the sidebars! Use to be Youtube would give you the option to do that automatically. I will have to figure out how to get rid of them.
Thank you for the compliment on my voice!:redface:
2) Thank you! Sometimes I get too quiet and have to remember that people are watching..LOL I could bump it up to 1080p but the load times seem so much longer. My computer system is in need of an overhaul as well.
3) My endings do seem to feel the weakest for me. I will work on something simple and a lot less "Begging" and more just finishing more professionally.
4) I will see what I can do about leveling the music out!
Thank you so much for taking the time to watch and comment! I really appreciate the time! *bow*:wavespin:
 
I have implemented some fixes so aptly suggested by slowlist! I could use an updated opinion from someone please! Thank you folks!
 
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