Hello guy, please take a look and provide feedback, new intro.

I like the effect. The only thing I would say is that you might want change the size of the text. "FewTuberGames" text didn't seem to pop out to me and I had a little trouble initially reading it.

So I guess I'm saying is bring attention to the the text.
 
Good intro, but I would have used another font and colour of the text, because it was hard to read.
Good luck! :D
 
I like the effect. The only thing I would say is that you might want change the size of the text. "FewTuberGames" text didn't seem to pop out to me and I had a little trouble initially reading it.

So I guess I'm saying is bring attention to the the text.

Now that you've said it, so am I, and I am currently working on it, thank you for feedback.[DOUBLEPOST=1345199863,1345199835][/DOUBLEPOST]
Good intro, but I would have used another font and colour of the text, because it was hard to read.
Good luck! :D

As is mentioned above, I'm now working on it, thank you :)
 
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