Fresh intro, rate please:D

[GloverPictures]

After an unsuccessful attempt at making an intro from a tutorial, (Which i took hours on!!) I decided to get a template and edit my name into that. So here it is!
Please let me know any other suitable songs, couldn't think of any at the time

 

[Camille Montpetit]

Simple but yet effective.
And I dont have a lot of free music in my possession.

 

[GamersAscendant]

I think that music is fine. I will say you should probably cut it down a bit, 10 seconds is a little too long and you want to hook your audience fast.

 

[GloverPictures]

Simple but yet effective.
And I dont have a lot of free music in my possession.

Thanks!! Ohh don't worry about music you own, just any odd music that would flow better[DOUBLEPOST=1367599356,1367599274][/DOUBLEPOST]

I think that music is fine. I will say you should probably cut it down a bit, 10 seconds is a little too long and you want to hook your audience fast.

Okay sure, I may cut it down for future videos. Also do you reckon I should use the same background movie for outro's?

 

[GamersAscendant]

Thanks!! Ohh don't worry about music you own, just any odd music that would flow better[DOUBLEPOST=1367599356,1367599274][/DOUBLEPOST]

Okay sure, I may cut it down for future videos. Also do you reckon I should use the same background movie for outro's?

Yeah, it'll bring a sense of solidarity. If you just move the text and put room for like more videos, and whatever buttons you want it'd work well.

 

[GloverPictures]

Yeah, it'll bring a sense of solidarity. If you just move the text and put room for like more videos, and whatever buttons you want it'd work well.

Cheers! Thanks a lot for the advice, and reviewing my intro. Let me know any time you want anything reviewed