First real attempt at directing...feedback would be most appreciated!

Token

Loving YTtalk

Like I said, this is the first time actually going for something more serious in the whole directing aspect...any feedback would be HUGE. I want to get better as much as possible. So let me know.
 
Two girls one cup... that is what came to mind with that pudding thing lol

Ginger wannabe´s 4tw!

That made me want to high five the air haha

Overall it was ok but it sloped downwards the longer it got but the directing was pretty nice.

The sound could use some fixing, there was a hizzing sound that made the "cuts" between scenes/perspectives too obvious. Directional microphones help with that aspect for sure (if you are using a camera that has the input for one that is)

Overall I could see myself in a sketch made by you, there is potential for sure! Keep it up!

Jonathan
 
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