Two girls one cup... that is what came to mind with that pudding thing lol
Ginger wannabe´s 4tw!
That made me want to high five the air haha
Overall it was ok but it sloped downwards the longer it got but the directing was pretty nice.
The sound could use some fixing, there was a hizzing sound that made the "cuts" between scenes/perspectives too obvious. Directional microphones help with that aspect for sure (if you are using a camera that has the input for one that is)
Overall I could see myself in a sketch made by you, there is potential for sure! Keep it up!
Jonathan