Feedback.

I'm not a youtube gamer but from what I've noticed the ones who seem to get the best response are when they show a lot of excitement in their voices while they're playing. It's kinda like if I'm watching a gameplay and it's not teaching or entertaining me in a way different from playing the game myself .. I'll get bored and move on .. or just go play the game myself. So, I would just try to introduced more excitement in your voice.
 
Hm, well firstly pretty good quality in the video itself. All that's missing is the commentary skills, believe me it's hard to master a skill like that. Many people find themselves dribbling on about random topics, or a random silence in the middle of their video and they try to cover to up by mumbling, etc. What helped me when I had a gaming channel was, I had a notepad next to myself about topics I'd discuss as I did non-live commentaries over gameplay as people seemed to enjoy them. So maybe practice with that, or maybe a dualcom (commentary with someone else, another youtuber or friend that you're comfortable with)
 
Thanks for the feedback guys. Which video did you watch? It's my "partner"/friend who commentates the videos and he's new to it. So I bet he'll get better at it as time goes by. Thanks for the tips tho.
 
First of all you will get better over time i actually watch a fair number of larger channels larger i mean from 100 thousand to over a million on some.I have actually seen some of there videos when they first started out they weren't so good i don't think many youtubers were when they first started out.Honestly i think it takes practice and time and hard work gameplay commentary is not as easy as most people think it is a skill. if you don't already know it would be good to figure out your style of commentary funny ,sarcastic whatever style your personality is hope this helps;)
 
I have to agree with Eqo, Commentary skills are the main thing separating you from everyone else. First things first, try and lower the volume on the gameplay and raise it on the commentary. I found it hard to hear you using my speakers and headphones, which isn't usually an appealing thing to viewers :) Other then that, the quality is great and you have a brilliant future ahead of you. <3
 
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