Feedback to my cartoon intro? [Might make free cartoon intro's to get better]

[Kaysah]

hey can anyone give me a feed back? on my first cartoonish intro? i'm going to start making free intros just to get better at it, comment, thumbs up and subscribe and inbox me if u want a free intro

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[portiz]

this is rate my branding not my video..

 

[Kareem Cox]

nice but short

 

[ricardo s]

it's cool thinking about what I would make my cartoon intro nice intro