Feedback on my commentary

[WolfzHound]

Hello

I am a new YouTuber and I'm looking for some feedback on my 'commentary skill'

If you could take a moment of your time to tell me how my commentaries are then that would be awesome

Note: In my Halo 4 review my audio levels are a bit low. I am aware of this but I would like it if you could comment on my commentary, not my audio levels


Thanks!


-Wolf

 

[dereckjoel3]

volume is too low, i can barely hear you talking. Hope this helps

 

[WolfzHound]

volume is too low, i can barely hear you talking. Hope this helps

Yeah. I realize that. I'll be sure to fix it for future videos Thanks for the reply!