Feedback on Intro

[CynicalPilot]

Hey, Would love some feedback on my video intro, it was my first attempt at a video intro using after effects and I really enjoyed making it.

Also thinking about refining it or maybe looking at using a different technique to completely re-do it.

 

[BlockDesigns]

Nice, there is 2 things i would do, i would maybe make the text introduction faster, Ecabrams has a great tutorial on a classy text slide in that would make it look very cool, i also think maybe a change of music behind it could make it super relaxed and chilled
Just my opinion though

 

[CynicalPilot]

Thanks man, I was thinking the intro music was a little loud and obnoxious for peoples ears! Will definetly check out that tutorial too.

 

[ForeverAlonePrick]

I guess it looks fine. It depends on what you're going for in terms of effect created by the intro. It's a very relaxing one I suppose, but then you play a shooting game. Maybe it should be more lively?