Hey Robbie, some of my thoughts:
-use more inserted clips like with the bus and torch runner, and don't wait until 1 min into the vid to use them, like maybe have an intro clip.
- it also got a bit off topic from the olympics when you just put the 3d glasses on, I kind of lost interest at that point and also because I didn't want you to spoil that movie because I haven't seen it yet.
You seem likeable though, so you got that going for ya. Just some more post production and focus on topic imo