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Welll.......not entirely but if someone could give a channel review/feedback i would appreciate it, i work well with constructive crit so go H.A.M (Hard As A Motherf*cker)
 
Sweet man! means alot to us! And shoutout to Duolicious for the channle art :D
After rewatching it there's just one thing I have to say
The part where agent blindy throws the punch doesn't look right. You could do one of two things

1. Just show agent blindy pulling his fist up and then show the kid getting punched

or

2. Do the same thing except skip straight to the kid getting punched

It looks weird since you see Agent punching but there's like 2 seconds b4 it actually hits the kid
 
After rewatching it there's just one thing I have to say
The part where agent blindy throws the punch doesn't look right. You could do one of two things

1. Just show agent blindy pulling his fist up and then show the kid getting punched

or

2. Do the same thing except skip straight to the kid getting punched

It looks weird since you see Agent punching but there's like 2 seconds b4 it actually hits the kid

Oh yeah i see what u mean haha it does look a tad odd
We wanted to recreate this:
(skip to 1:22)[DOUBLEPOST=1369592759,1369592707][/DOUBLEPOST]
Oh yeah i see what u mean haha it does look a tad odd
We wanted to recreate this:
(skip to 1:22)

Just like the way hes so casual about getting shot multiple times ahaha, thanks for giving your crit also! Really helps!
 
Well ok if that's what you want...
You're lazy!!! You never do anything right!! Why do you play video games all day while your mother works so hard to provide you with food and clothes!! You never help around the house!! GET A JOB!!!

I didn't want to, but you asked.
 
Well ok if that's what you want...
You're lazy!!! You never do anything right!! Why do you play video games all day while your mother works so hard to provide you with food and clothes!! You never help around the house!! GET A JOB!!!

I didn't want to, but you asked.

Oh god its true....ITS ALLL TRUE

Meh,

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