Creative Critism Feedback For My New Video!

Hahah, Dude, that was freaking hilarious. Keep it up man, you earned yourself another Loyal subscriber! :D
 
Jordan Rhodes said:
hey guys can you check out my "Toasted" Video on my channel and give me some feed back please!:)
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Not funny with that being the whole video, but I can see this being an intro to some sort of cartoon type battle with the toaster. Like where Wil-E Coyote gets burnt by his ACME missiles and everything, but you have to do more approaches to the toaster trying different methods. The ending of the battle has to be more epic. This is a good start if you can come up with more progression
 
Hey man, thanks for the feedback! We weren't trying to make this like a whole epic movie, haha we just do super short videos (1 min - 2 min) that focus on one particular scene. I know its really short, but that's just our style.:)
 
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