Could You Review My Comedy Skits

[Brandon Dorner]

This is my most recent video, I've gotten a lot of good feedback from all my friends but I want a stranger's review cause I know there is always room for improvement.
I just want to know how funny you thought it was and whether or not the quality or editing could've been better.
If you do review be completely honest cause I take criticism well and won't be offended as long as it's helpful and not just "you suck bro".
Thanks!

 

[Turwinkle]

The beginning was great! I liked the interview with the sister..and mom's view..the rest were not my thing..but the premise was great! Your audio was a bit quiet when you were not next to the mike..I would pump those up. The peeing at the end thing..not sure why that was there..took away from the rest I think. Overall, the cuts were pretty clean..there was one that had a long pause in it..so I would tighten that one up. You do need an intro and an outro as well. Keep it up. Again, not my style of humor, so I cannot say if it were funny or not. For me, no. But that is just me! I liked the idea behind the comedy though.