Channel Review

[MirandaMaeve]

Hey everyone- my name is Miranda and I was wondering if you could check out some of my videos and review them. I make videos with my best friend Maeve, and we pretty much just hang out, talk, and try to make our videos fun to watch. Any type of advice is appreciated, thanks!!!

 

[TheBoredomPage]

You have good energy and I enjoy the randomness! Congratulations, you now have me as a subscriber!

 

[MirandaMaeve]

Aw thanks so much- that means a lot to us!!!!

 

[TheBoredomPage]

No problem!

 

[ForeverAlonePrick]

You guys are very energetic, but there isn't really a focus. In my mind, it doesn't exactly look like something somebody would subscribe to watch regularly. Just my opinion.

 

[Tarmack]

I've got to agree with ... Forever, did you realize the Acronym for your nick is FAP? Just an observation.

Miranda, you have the energy to make something of it. I'd focus on a central topic. If you watch a fair number of vlogs out there, you'll find that they frequently do include video much like you are doing but they do it as cuts in between the main video presentation where they are talking about something specific. So for example someone may be discussing politics, or a bad situation at work, etc. They probably screw up what they were going to say and thus cut that part of the video out. They throw in a goofy bit sometimes instead of just getting right back to the action to break tension and loosen things up a little.

With all goofy bits, it lacks focus.

 

[MirandaMaeve]

Thanks everyone- we're making another video- i'll post it on here tomorrow, we'll try to have some focus this time