Can you review my review please?

[Hypersonic55]

Howdy ladies and gents, I was wondering if you could have a look at my review and tell me what how it could be improved. The thing is I'm planning to go visual and overhaul my reviewing style, but right now i don't have the equipment necessary to do it so this is my general style of reviewing films atm. I my views seem to be every hit-or-miss and i use appropriate tags and upload my videos normally within a week of the film's release and yet sometimes i get nowhere. So any suggestions you have would relaly help, thanks

Here's the video:

 

[Stef]

Hey, I thought your review was actually really good. It just felt like more of podcast than a YouTube video. Have you ever thought of coming on camera? But, the review itself was great to me.

 

[Hypersonic55]

Hey, I thought your review was actually really good. It just felt like more of podcast than a YouTube video. Have you ever thought of coming on camera? But, the review itself was great to me.

Thanks a lot yo, I do try really hard with my reviews. It wasn't until the summer when I considered coming on camera, I would really like to but I don't have the equipment or the funds to obtain them atm. Once I have the cash I probably will go visual. So would you say going on camera would increase my viewership?

 

[Stef]

Thanks a lot yo, I do try really hard with my reviews. It wasn't until the summer when I considered coming on camera, I would really like to but I don't have the equipment or the funds to obtain them atm. Once I have the cash I probably will go visual. So would you say going on camera would increase my viewership?

Yes, I think it definitely will because the actual content is good but it would help to have face to put to the voice so your viewers can connect to you better.