can u guys review my first vid

[injusticeexpert7]

hey guys so I just made my first video for my second channel and was wondering if you guys could review the channel/video for intro outro enthusiasm enjoyment banner pro pic etc

well here's the link

 

[iMSaiyan]

Okay so obviously the audio, but you already know that. That HUGE a** thing on the bottom left is too much, you need to take that off. Also your main link isn't working. I'd work on the channel trailer, no one wants to you to keep talking about what you are going to do....like why lol, make it entertaining or make your trailer more interesting with a purpose.

 

[KQ4rt]

For me I'm not a huge fan of 3D intro to be honest but your audio is quiet so you need to work on that. Your channel link doesn't work and you should also play with the advance layout for your channel too! Also brighten the text in your profile pic more so we can read it. Other than that, you are good to go