Can someone review this thumbnail for me?

[Christopher]

So I've been meaning to do a custom thumbnail for my slender series for a while. Could someone tell me what they think of this thumbnail, seeing I'm not entirely sure whether I like it or not. If you saw this in your suggested videos bar, would it make you want to watch it more or not really?

(You don't have to watch the video, but you can if you want)

 

[raiN]

It's pretty cool but your picture on the right sight doesnt look really professional... its kinda deformed and bad cutted
I'd also use another font for "Chris Plays" & "Attempt #2" because this one is a bit random.
When you improve this things I would watch the Video for sure!

Cheers

 

[Christopher]

Thanks, the picture on the right is kind of deformed seeing I ran out of space. As for the font, that's the font I used with my other thumbnails, so I guess I just stuck with it for tradition's sake . How do you think I should go about improving the picture on the right to make it look less badly cut (if that makes sense).

 

[raiN]

maybe use some softness on the edges, cut the edges more precise or (if you got) try to take a picture in front of a greenscreen... this looks most professional

 

[Christopher]

maybe use some softness on the edges, cut the edges more precise or (if you got) try to take a picture in front of a greenscreen... this looks most professional

Thanks, I don't have a greenscreen, I guess I'll soften the edges a bit and tone the brightness of the picture down a bit so it's less jarring.