Can I get some feedback?

[Azreeo]

Hey There,

So I make vlogs, like a lot of you and I'm looking to get some feedback on how I can improve my channels content.

I currently try to make the editing exciting and hook the viewer by incorporate VFX, I use music to help the pacing on the video, I try to keep my videos short so people don't get bored, I use endscreen graphics to give the videos a more professional branded look and I'm trying to keep a weekly upload schedule. But there just feels like there is something different in the entertainment level of my content and the content of people who I watch and enjoy. I can't quite figure out what it is so I was hoping that you guys might be able to give me some tips on the areas you think are weakest and some ideas on where I can improve?

Here's my Latest video.

Thanks in advance
Mike!

 

[ForeverAlonePrick]

Really nice! The intro was great and eye-grabbing, you were engaging, and listening to you talk was awesome. I also thought your topic was interesting, even though I've never watched the show. Great vlog, I subscribed and look forward to watching more!

 

[Azreeo]

Really nice! The intro was great and eye-grabbing, you were engaging, and listening to you talk was awesome. I also thought your topic was interesting, even though I've never watched the show. Great vlog, I subscribed and look forward to watching more!

Thanks so much buddy! Really appreciate the kind words! Is there anything you'd suggest I work on that could help improve my content?

 

[ForeverAlonePrick]

Thanks so much buddy! Really appreciate the kind words! Is there anything you'd suggest I work on that could help improve my content?

I guess that overall, your voice was somewhat soft and lacked any real animation. I'd try being more enthusiastic with your content, especially if it's something really interesting like this. To have an exciting intro and topic, yet be somewhat silent with your speech is a present contrast, and I'd watch out for that, or at least keep it in mind.

 

[Azreeo]

I guess that overall, your voice was somewhat soft and lacked any real animation. I'd try being more enthusiastic with your content, especially if it's something really interesting like this. To have an exciting intro and topic, yet be somewhat silent with your speech is a present contrast, and I'd watch out for that, or at least keep it in mind.

I'll definitely try and work on that, I find it awkward filming while people are in the house, but that's always the case, I'll just have to get over it haha Thanks man!

 

[ForeverAlonePrick]

I'll definitely try and work on that, I find it awkward filming while people are in the house, but that's always the case, I'll just have to get over it haha Thanks man!

Yeah, I know that feeling as well. That's what I had to deal with at home, and now that I'm in my dorm at college it's even weirder! Just make do with what you have. Best of luck to you!

 

[IamKeyring]

At first I thought the smoothness of your voice would be a pain to hear, But it ended up really suiting the pace of the video and stuff, good job!

 

[Azreeo]

At first I thought the smoothness of your voice would be a pain to hear, But it ended up really suiting the pace of the video and stuff, good job!

My voice definitely needs work to be more animated and entertaining. Anything else you picked up that I could work on as well?

 

[IamKeyring]

My voice definitely needs work to be more animated and entertaining. Anything else you picked up that I could work on as well?

I really can't think of anything, It looks professional and its all done very well, Genuinely don't think much improvement is needed

 

[Azreeo]

I really can't think of anything, It looks professional and its all done very well, Genuinely don't think much improvement is needed

Wow Thanks a lot mate!! Looks like I'll get working on projecting my voice better for now then!