Can i get my video reviewed pweeeeze :3

The video appears well composed. Though you didn't include any information on why you ranked the characters the way you did.

I would suggest shortening your intro. It's 21 seconds before action begins. Perhaps just cutting straight to the action 5 seconds in and putting the "If you disagree" message at the end of the video, or as a text overlay throughout. It would also be good to add some audio during the intro, even if it's just background game audio from the video game you're pulling.
 
Tarmack said:
The video appears well composed. Though you didn't include any information on why you ranked the characters the way you did.

I would suggest shortening your intro. It's 21 seconds before action begins. Perhaps just cutting straight to the action 5 seconds in and putting the "If you disagree" message at the end of the video, or as a text overlay throughout. It would also be good to add some audio during the intro, even if it's just background game audio from the video game you're pulling.
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great advice maybe i can fix things n re upload it
 
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