I dont really want to make this too long so ill keep it to short bullet points.
- I dont get the hood
- "Havnt uploaded in a while" You only have 2 videos
- Your friend is either too quiet or has no enthusiasm
- Lighting should be infront of you not behind you. Try to face windows not have them behind you
- Audio could do with some touching up in audacity. Easy enough to do.
- You might want to add some music in the background to help the video flow. Also cut out anything thats not relevant or has no commentary
- The videos are a good length but maybe keep it shorter for now untill you get a bigger following
- Using yourself to brand your channel is a good idea. Makes you already stand out from other channels who only have logo's/avatars
- Thubnails are good.
- You need a new or updated logo
Thats all I can think of for now, but keep at it. Remeber though, if you are not enthusiastic about your content, then your audience will pick up on it.
I would come back on here when you have more videos to get a better review of your channel