[Video Review] How is my voiceover, audio and plot content, pacing for the video?

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First and most important thing - what can I do to help my videos keep more attention?

Is the video too boring? Or is it engaging?

Second - please tell me honestly, how to improve my voice? The pronunciation sucks in my opinion. Is there some method to make it better?

Is audio quality ok overall?

 
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I would only try to improve on video length = shorter videos. Otherwise you are doing great, keep going.
Thanks for feedback! Are you absolutely sure about the length? I heard Youtube values videos in length of 10-13 minutes, because these videos can be better monetised via sticking ads in the middle.