Second motorcycle-video: What can I still improve?

JUPI

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Hey guys,

improvement of my videos is really important to me. I think that I was able to improve my new Video
compared to my first motorcycle video. But this makes it so much harder to improve the next one.
If you could give me a little feedback on it, that would be very helpful. Thank You.

New Video:

First Video:
 
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