Review on my Minecraft video.Constructive criticism please.

[sunnyau]

40 Rooms(Ep.1) - Rush the map!

Please give constructive critism and tell me where it can be improved.

 

[LadyFMG]

Invest in a better mic, your sound is really crappy, talk more clear and try to get your mouse clicking down, it's rather annoying tbh. There's nothing there the sticks to me, and makes me keep on watching. When recording try to be enthusiastic about it, if you're having fun then your audience will most likely enjoy it too

 

[sunnyau]

Invest in a better mic, your sound is really crappy, talk more clear and try to get your mouse clicking down, it's rather annoying tbh. There's nothing there the sticks to me, and makes me keep on watching. When recording try to be enthusiastic about it, if you're having fun then your audience will most likely enjoy it too

Thanks!I will try to improve it in the 3rd video!(Because I have recorded the second....)