Our first sketch, tell us what you think please

Some of the suggestions I was going to make have already been said. I'd also try to take it easy on some the effects. The slow-mo was cool at first but it became overdone quickly. I'd also trim down a lot of the stuff that drags on.

Nice job overall though. Great first attempt at a sketch.
 
Thanks you guys for your suggestions,
IsntChrisL said:
Some of the suggestions I was going to make have already been said. I'd also try to take it easy on some the effects. The slow-mo was cool at first but it became overdone quickly. I'd also trim down a lot of the stuff that drags on.

Nice job overall though. Great first attempt at a sketch.
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ThatLostMike said:
Editing kind of threw me off. Nice first jab at comedy though.
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Thanks guys for your adivce and criticism and the editing will be better this week as ive got some better software and i was just working with what i had last week ( Movie maker) but now ill be using vegas pro :)
 
LOOOL loved it . especially the pagan bit xD
the slo mo bits did go on for a while though but other than that
absolutely hilarious!
 
Very good nice camera angles and good acting also the guy dancing is a terrible dancer ;) just saying very good quality camera and great editing well done :)
 
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