Need Tips and Advice on my gaming videos

[AdaneOasis]

I would like to get better and improve my overall quality on my gaming videos. I just start out like half a year ago so I'm slowly investing in better tools to record my game. What should I do and what should I not do?

Thanks in advance and tips and here's the latest video as an example :

 

[Nate Turner]

Overall, its good that you are posting.

Couple things to improve though.

1. You need a new banner, try finding someone for channel art or going through tutorials on Photoshop. If you dont have it then try and figure something out.
2. Try posting some more popular content.
3. Make your thumbnails stand out more, try using borders on your text.

Other than that it looks pretty good

 

[AdaneOasis]

Overall, its good that you are posting.

Couple things to improve though.

1. You need a new banner, try finding someone for channel art or going through tutorials on Photoshop. If you dont have it then try and figure something out.
2. Try posting some more popular content.
3. Make your thumbnails stand out more, try using borders on your text.

Other than that it looks pretty good

Thanks Nate! I really appreciate your constructive criticism, I will start doing more research on a new banner (which I have been meaning to for the past two weeks). And investing more time on popular content is what I've been told too so I'll keep that in mind. And thanks for the thumbnail suggestion, never thought of that!

Thanks buddy! YTTALK is the best haha!