My Second attempt at Telling a story! How did I do?

[JV Trammell]

Hello everyone! I recently told a story on my channel about the time an Old Man almost ran one of my friends over with his truck. I would love some feedback on how I did. Was the story engaging? Funny? Was the quality good? Would you watch another video like this?

Thanks for any feedback!

 

[MindofEnvy]

Yeah this was good, I like the cut com style. It was not boring at all and actually pretty good. You have a natural youtube voice, keep it up! Subbed!

 

[JV Trammell]

Yeah this was good, I like the cut com style. It was not boring at all and actually pretty good. You have a natural youtube voice, keep it up! Subbed!

Thank you very much! I really appreciate that.