In purpose of improving!

[SimpleUnboxingTV]

Hello guys

I am a fairly new Youtuber,
I would very much appreciate if you could have a look at my video and tell me what you think of my work.
What needs to improve? Does this video catch your attention as a viewer? And if so, What makes this video interesting?

Thank you guys in advance.

 

[anime destruction]

Looks ok,the music goes well with the video. the video quality is a bit choppy so invest in a better camera in future

 

[SimpleUnboxingTV]

Thank you very much for an honest review Anime destruction!
I'll keep that in mind, Hopefully i will get better equipment with time, But i got to start somewhere!
Best wishes!