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I just need somebodies advice on my commentaries. I feel sometimes my mind drifts off and makes me commentate in a really boring tone and sometimes I don't know what to say so sometimes I say wierd things out of the blue!
If you could look at one of my videos, even just for 10 seconds, and tell me what I could improve my commentaries or if you could tell me any tips to keep my thoughts coming in then please tell me!
Any advice is taken well
Thanks for reading. See you around!

Thanks for clicking on this thread

I just need somebodies advice on my commentaries. I feel sometimes my mind drifts off and makes me commentate in a really boring tone and sometimes I don't know what to say so sometimes I say wierd things out of the blue!
If you could look at one of my videos, even just for 10 seconds, and tell me what I could improve my commentaries or if you could tell me any tips to keep my thoughts coming in then please tell me!
Any advice is taken well

Thanks for reading. See you around!