I just started my new channel and would like some feedback

[NecroPhantom]

Heyy everyone!! Thanks in advance for reading this. I started a gaming channel 6-7 days ago. I decided to wait a little bit before posting here to make sure I saw how the channel did first and then i could get some feedback on how to improve. For now I have 4 videos in a playlist for the same game, but I'm actually planning on playing different games and seeing how my current subscribers react to the different genres of games. My channel is https://youtube.com/channel/UCUVMCxcVURnNV9snJDRxEQw
And my first video is:

Any feedback or comments would be appreciate it. I'm very new to YouTube so it'll be nice to see what other people think of it

 

[mirrorlessNY(youtuber)]

it would probably help if you made the Part # more visible on thumbnail

 

[nay1995]

I think the thumbnail needs some work but the video it’s self is great, the text needs to stand out more