Help in seeing what I can improve on in my video !

Ruth Taylor

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I have recently created this video and Im trying to improve my intro and outro videos and my editing.
My newest video has my new outro and a intro video whereas my others do not, I was hoping to get another set of eyes to review my editing and intro/outro on my newest video

Also a general look on how can I improve myself on the spooky box club review videos.
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thank you !
 
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