Can you guys review my video?

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Hey what is up guys!? I'm here for some feedback on a couple of things because sometimes I need some help everyone does. my videos are supposed to be funny/serious skill plays. I'm playing rainbow six siege with my other friends who are also starting out. so I want to make sure to capture all of the funny moments in the video. so I'm asking your feedback on editing, intro and outros. I want to be simplistic but funny and entertaining so let me know guys. heres the video:

p.s I'm gonna try to be more enthusiastic in my next intro and outro.
p.s.s my videos do feature cruising so please be wary