Can someone give this a read?

What do you reckon? Does this sound better?

"Throughout the ages, the use of instruments in gaming has been able to open secrets, change the gameplay, destroy your enemies, or just provide some fun Easter Eggs. So sit down on your piano chairs, grab your drumsticks and tighten the strings of your guitar, because I'm we're going to pump this video to 88 miles per hour, and go back in time."

That sounds a lot better and you know it! :D Crisp and clean and of course, reference dropping. Sounds a lot more hype this way as opposed to before where it sounds like you were gonna start a documentary or somethin on the History Channel :thumbsup2:
 
That sounds a lot better and you know it! :D Crisp and clean and of course, reference dropping. Sounds a lot more hype this way as opposed to before where it sounds like you were gonna start a documentary or somethin on the History Channel :thumbsup2:

Hehe thanks! Speaking of crisp and clean, I tried recording this one in my bathroom (as opposed to the bedroom), and the sound quality it significantly higher! So that's a bonus to! Tommorow, I got a day off school after exams, so a solid day of editing!
 
Nice! I wouldn't have thought to record in the bathroom but I guess that makes sense. Can't wait to see how it all turns out.
 
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