Bring Yon Smiling Faces Hither Prithee and Tell Me What Ye Think?

Staying Alive Comedy

Staying Alive Comedy

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I would love some feedback on yon video! Feedback on the comedy aspect is especially appreciated, but general feedback is great too! What could we do funnier etc?

 
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You're a very 'dry' comic, which is interesting. The fact that you were jump-cutting in the middle of sentences messed with the delivery a bit in some places, in my opinion. The video felt a bit slow, but I liked YOU! Interested in seeing how you develop :)
 
Thanks for the feedback! We actually have a number of different actors in our different videos and I am just behind the scenes directing, editing, etc. :D I'll make sure to pass on your compliment to Nathan who was in this latest episode! Thanks again for the honest feedback! The pacing feedback is especially appreciated!
 
What is the correct way to bump? I would really appreciate some more insight into this episode? What is funny, what could be better?

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