improving

I have recently created this video and Im trying to improve my intro and outro videos and my editing. My newest video has my new outro and a intro video whereas my others do not, I was hoping to get another set of eyes to review my editing and intro/outro on my newest video Also a general...

Hi everyone! I am new to the YTT but one thing i can say is that this forum is amazing. So much information you can use to improve your channel, so many good youtubers willing to support and give an advice. My channel is fairly new. There are only few videos on as i am trying to see what works...