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Hi guys (n' gals)! This is my first post to the video links forum (can't post to the main page yet) -
So some friends of mine and I made a short film Deal (4m44s long) for a local car maker as part of a competition... The theme that we were handed was Lost - Would love to know what you think of our film, of course... But more specifically since we are not professionals:
How can we improve as film makers? Basically, what do you think is wrong with this film (or how can it be made better)? Would love to have an outsiders perspective on this as friends and family are generally too polite...
Here's the film:
Thanks for your time and your valuable feedback in advance. Cheers!
So some friends of mine and I made a short film Deal (4m44s long) for a local car maker as part of a competition... The theme that we were handed was Lost - Would love to know what you think of our film, of course... But more specifically since we are not professionals:
How can we improve as film makers? Basically, what do you think is wrong with this film (or how can it be made better)? Would love to have an outsiders perspective on this as friends and family are generally too polite...
Here's the film:
Thanks for your time and your valuable feedback in advance. Cheers!