What can i do to improve?

[TheDarthMilezShow]

Hi Guys

please take a look at my channel and advise what i can do to improve it / tweak?

i know that i could improve the video quality, im currently running at 720p 30fps, sometimes randomly it will push to 1080p when it wants to... but im working on it.. i need more funding from somewhere lol.

i am more so interested in what content can be improved

 

[EliteTowerStudios]

Watched your video "The Pokemon Go Show! #1" and here are some thoughts

• Intro was a little too long, most need to stay between five and ten seconds
• music was too loud, could barely hear you
• You introdued your self and said what the video is about, that is good
• Not enough comentary
• video is too long, cut it down to just the best parts
• no good outtro, the call to action was a little annoying

Hope that helps

 

[TheDarthMilezShow]

Watched your video "The Pokemon Go Show! #1" and here are some thoughts

• Intro was a little too long, most need to stay between five and ten seconds
• music was too loud, could barely hear you
• You introdued your self and said what the video is about, that is good
• Not enough comentary
• video is too long, cut it down to just the best parts
• no good outtro, the call to action was a little annoying

Hope that helps

thanks man appreciate the feedback greatly.

im working on a new intro at the moment and trying to get the sound mix right.

working on the outro as well.