Seems fine. However, I think your competing in a really crowded space. In the Dream World episode it would have been nice if you had offered more commentary about the rides, prices, attractions etc. How much is the annual pass? What advantages does the pass offer as opposed to buying a day admission. How long would it take to see all the attractions?
Also when showing the Claw I would have like to have seen how high it went. So there you could have zoomed out perhaps.
How long is the train ride? Is the price included in the admission? Are the lines long? What would you, personally, rate Dream World on a 1-10 scale.
Overall it was ok. Keep up the good work and don't get discouraged. I have been going since June 2018 and am still not at 200 subs.