VIDEO REVIEW - Please give me a review on the overall quality and interest

[Hooctapus]

I’ve been making YouTube videos for a year now and I do it mostly because I love the whole process and being goofy with my friends and seeing their faces light up when I’ve finally finished editing the vlog they were in. But now I’m starting to get more ‘serious’ in it and I want to start making more quality content. But I don’t know what to change or where to start. Im looking for feedback that will tell me what parts you got bored at, what parts just weren’t funny, the overuse of certain editing styles (zooming, sound effects, etc.) and how to grow my channel. Any feedback is greatly appreciated! Thanks so much

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