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ItsTehShadow

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Hi guys, as the title suggests I'm offering reviews :D. How I work, is that I go around the channel as a first time viewer, express my opinions and then offer positives/improvements based on my opinion.

If you would like a review please comment below. All reviews will be public unless you specify in your post. Just post (Private/Public).

Due to the amount of reviews I've moved older ones onto a text document for archiving, you can read this to see what you'll receive. Reviews are PDF's and to save and view these you will need a PDF viewer in browsers like Chrome or apps such as Adobe Acrobat Reader, which is available here: Click Me!
*These reviews are honest, its all my opinion though. I won't sugarcoat things either, you'll get the truth as that is what will aid improvement*

*Want to discuss my review, just PM me and I'll get back to you*

Archived Reviews Here: http://bit.ly/Z0Dh9C

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REVIEWS - COMPLETED / TO BE COMPLETED
18. ChintzyTurtle (ChintzyTurtle) - (http://bit.ly/13wuIkt)

19. Slowlist (Slowlist) - (PM'd ;))

20. SubjectSarah - (PM'd ;))

21. TundraZero - (TundraZer0) - (http://bit.ly/19Gn7ED)

22. TheBatteryChicken - (TheBatteryChicken) - (http://bit.ly/ZPJeXk)

23. PurpleGemini - (PurpleGemini) - (http://bit.ly/10ZE72a)

24. MrWapk - (MrWapk) - (http://bit.ly/14x2ypX) Sorry it took so long...

25. Other people, your reviews will be coming ASAP!
 

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rigpop

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Hey guys, so today I offered to review two people's channels in my own way, and provide what I would do for improvement. I've just finished the first review and really enjoyed. I therefore decided to offer this to anyone else who might want a review, via this thread. How I work, is that I go around the channel as a first time viewer, express my opinions and then offer positives/improvements based on my opinion.

If you would like a review please comment below. All these reviews will be private unless your fine with others seeing it, if so just say on your post (private/public). As they take about an hour I will probably only do a few a day, maybe more, time dependent.

Here's an image of the format so you can get an idea of how you will receive the review, I am doing this on PDF's so you can have an offline copy. To view these PDF's you will need a PDF viewer such as Adobe Acrobat Reader, which is available here: Click Me!

*These reviews are honest, its all my opinion though. Use my advice to help but don't rely it on 100%, your still the driving force behind it*
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1. PokeBroCast (rigpop) - (PM for download link, or tell me if its alright to post here)​
2. BlacklightDemon (BlacklightDemon) - (Currently doing this review, should be done soon)
You can post here no big deal ;)[DOUBLEPOST=1368220882,1368220386][/DOUBLEPOST]
Hey guys, so today I offered to review two people's channels in my own way, and provide what I would do for improvement. I've just finished the first review and really enjoyed. I therefore decided to offer this to anyone else who might want a review, via this thread. How I work, is that I go around the channel as a first time viewer, express my opinions and then offer positives/improvements based on my opinion.

If you would like a review please comment below. All these reviews will be private unless your fine with others seeing it, if so just say on your post (private/public). As they take about an hour I will probably only do a few a day, maybe more, time dependent.

Here's an image of the format so you can get an idea of how you will receive the review, I am doing this on PDF's so you can have an offline copy. To view these PDF's you will need a PDF viewer such as Adobe Acrobat Reader, which is available here: Click Me!

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*These reviews are honest, its all my opinion though. Use my advice to help but don't rely it on 100%, your still the driving force behind it*
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REVIEWS

1. PokeBroCast (rigpop) - (http://bit.ly/YzCSsk)

2. BlacklightDemon (BlacklightDemon) - (Currently doing this review, should be done soon)
Great Review and ill fix all the things ;)[DOUBLEPOST=1368221112][/DOUBLEPOST]Coulde we talk abit about some of the stuff ;)
 
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You can post here no big deal ;)[DOUBLEPOST=1368220882,1368220386][/DOUBLEPOST]
Great Review and ill fix all the things ;)[DOUBLEPOST=1368221112][/DOUBLEPOST]Coulde we talk abit about some of the stuff ;)
Sure, I was just writing the other review. I'm around for a bit, just PM :D

Oh, cool, i'd like to get a review for my channel. :)
I want to improve my channel as best as i can, that's why i need reviews.
Added you to the list, will have to do it tom though as its 11pm here :)
 
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Well I added annotations and the Audio ill fix in episode 7 of my upcoming video and yea ill fix all the things you said ;)
There only my views, pick and choose the ones you think are suitable, you don't need to adjust everything there just suggestions, but its nice to know that your taking them onboard :)
 

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You can post in public. I don't mind :D[DOUBLEPOST=1368224891,1368223969][/DOUBLEPOST]Thanks for the review :D

I'm now clear of the points I need to work on to make them that little bit better :) I'm trying to connect my sentences a little bit more. I know in my first commentary it wasn't very good at all, lol.

And thank you for the subscribe! :D Hope I live up to expectations!
 

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Oh, cool, i'd like to get a review for my channel. :)
I want to improve my channel as best as i can, that's why i need reviews.
Review is done, if your fine with it being public just say, otherwise I'll PM you the download link :D