Please review my first ever story time video!

piaiscool

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hi lovelies! Thank you for taking the time to check this out.
Really means a lot to me!
This is my first story time video and I was having second thoughts about doing it because
it might be very boring if I'm just going to be talking. Also, my english is a little bad that's why I had to add visualization for you to better understand my story.

I would love to hear what you think about the flow of the stories, elements added, music, etc.
Any feedback would really help!
Thank you once again!

 
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I loved your storytime video! A lot of people on youtube make them, and they are not always good but I really enjoyed yours! :) I liked the mixture of pictures and video of you talking. For example, when you had the drawing of the rooms and which side of the bed you slept on that helped a lot with the visualization of the story. I don't think your english is bad at all lol. Keep making videos! You're doing a great job!