Please help with video title

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Phiul

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Hello all,

Can I ask your opinion please? I'm not sure about the title of my video.

It's a comedy about a guy that didn't wash his hands after peeling an orange and that makes him be kind of rejected by people surround him.

But isn't the title too formal/institucional? Don't you think something more like "The guy who didn't wash it after peel it" or "The guy who didn't wash it after orange peel" would be better?

Thank you.
 
both are too descriptive and long and pigeon english.. they appear like they've been written by someone that has a different first language. I don't see how any of the words would be seo beneficial. Your best best for something like that might be:
You won't believe how an orange..
Would you go near this guy?
How an Orange can change your day !
You'll loose more friends than you win!
How an orange destroyed my life !
 
Thank you.

Yes something like that sounds much better. Thing is: I paid someone on fiverr to do that video SEO for me, but I don't really like that title, it's like it was an educational video or something. I guess that the tags aren't really the appropriate ones.

Not sure exactly what to do now.[DOUBLEPOST=1536260858,1536254932][/DOUBLEPOST]Just changed the title for "How could you, Orange?"
 
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