Please give feedback on my subject and presentation style

brainsApplied

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Hello ladies and gents,

I have made a new video and I would like to know if the subject and the way it is presented is entertaining and interesting enough.
Would you watch a video like this if you found it somewhere online?

Thanks in advance for your feedback! :)

Regards,
Willem
 

LostTrigger

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you've asked this before so hopefully you still have my comment on your last thread. however it sounds like your reading from a script and its monotone and unnatural. try to fluctuate your voice a bit more.