Opinions on my video?

[JakeFosterTV]

So can you tell me what you think? Is it good or bad and if you dislike it then tell me where I went wrong? Thanks

 

[LostTrigger]

not sure what to say but i had a few minor gripes. the mic quality isnt that good and i would invest in a better mic, also the video felt random. after thinking about it i could in some way relate it to the batman vs superman movie but just watching it it felt really random . if people think the content of a video isnt related to the title they might not stick around for the whole video and leave