Need your help with a new video series idea

GamerKeebzy

A Wild Keebzy Appears!
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well, here it is lol i'm not too sure i pulled it off tho xD but i did 3 takes and this is the one i hated least :p let me know what you think before i put it public haha

 

FlipRJ

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it was pretty good. beginning felt a little slow for my taste, but that's only cuz it was the beginning on the game. got better when you had to start fighting. I like how blasted like 3 balls of fire at the corpses to make sure they were dead! plus fire kills bacteria! I also liked how you literally sprinted through the cloud of dust near the beginning. though, maybe some coughs and a little more freaking out would have sold me!

overall, I thought it was pretty good!