I am not understanding a lot of the lyrics, I dont know the technical terms when it comes to music but I think the part just before you mention razor blades is very long and sounds like you're going out of breath a bit or it is hard to rap quickly enough. Maybe shortening the length of each line would help so its not so hard to get out.
I like the music you have on this one and I like the way it blends well with your rapping, it reminds me of that song by Eminem, Stan.
Ill review it. Send it to me: linzojayy@gmail.comSooo.....im releasing my new song "Mirrors" this week.
I got it recorded...but i need to know if its good or bad.
So please anybody who got time....give me your email so that i can send you the song and you give me your feedback.
Really need it.
Thanks
Ok.
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