My New Channel Trailer!

[XenithDragon]

Hey everyone! Im Xen, and after having a slighty disappointing channel introduction, I have finally put some time into making a new one! What do you guys think about it?
Any feedback or anything I could improve on?

Thanks,
Xen

 

[TheReading]

Not bad simply, looks like you took some time matching the drops in the video zoom so that looks good too.

 

[Jacob Raby]

Amazing intro!! The music is awesome the effects are awesome! All around a good intro!! You make me want to try my luck at making an intro! Keep it up man!

 

[DeliciousCrackers]

I feel like it's a bit too long. Maybe half of it would be good.