Nice video, good quality but maybe you should really show what you do. Like for example, you tell you conceal your undereyes. We see you smear some concealer under your eyes and *POOF* all blended. If you could show some more action I think it would be more interesting to look at. If you're worried your video takes to long. First film your face makeup, then film your eye makeup of 1 eye and then top it off with your lipstick. Safes you time but people can see exactely what you do. (Offcourse you do your other eye too only don't edit that part in. Or do it off camera.)
Hope this helps.