Looking for some advice to keep peoples attention!

Symph

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Hmmm.... you have a good presence, you're likeable. You almost make me laugh sometimes, I liked how you began "man on a chair". But I feel like it's not quite there yet, like maybe you should do more cutaways and use sound FX and put music behind it or something. I see the potential, I think you need to add some pizazz... keep it up!
 

Tom Elliott

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My new one that I'm exporting right now has some cutaways/sound fxs, I tried a backing track but I don't like it. Might try it on a shorter video to see! Hopefully it will be up in about 5 hours haha. Thanks for the advice, I will continue to incorporate new ideas in my videos!
 

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Look forward to seeing what you come up with!