Looking for feedback on my gaming YouTube channel

[Great 5s]

Hey everyone, I've recently started up my gaming channel again, and was just looking for some feedback.

Here are some things i know i have to work on.

Audio - I don't have the best setup and you can hear me make noises with my mouth. However i do try my best to keep it to a minimum.

Editing - I know i could use more editing, i just don't really know how to do it all at the moment

Swearing - I don't know if this will really affect my channel. I tend to swear a lot, when i'm not really thinking about it.

I would mainly want feedback on my newer content.

My gaming youtube channel can be found at https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCL9qr_bksvk-xvos23lywlQ, or if you type Zandrom into youtube

 

[Lizzeelive]

Hi! Your audio is fine! I think editing is the main thing you need to focus on. Don't worry, me too! I would recommend cutting out the dead space in your editing program. There is quite a bit of it! That's ok though, I do that too, I think everyone does! You are very cool and I enjoyed your rocket league video! The swearing shouldn't affect your channel any! Most people swear these days. Even me, I just don't on camera because I choose not to. I can't wait to see you grow! I know you will when you get editing down! Expect to see me around your channel some too! I will be watching!

 

[Great 5s]

Hi! Your audio is fine! I think editing is the main thing you need to focus on. Don't worry, me too! I would recommend cutting out the dead space in your editing program. There is quite a bit of it! That's ok though, I do that too, I think everyone does! You are very cool and I enjoyed your rocket league video! The swearing shouldn't affect your channel any! Most people swear these days. Even me, I just don't on camera because I choose not to. I can't wait to see you grow! I know you will when you get editing down! Expect to see me around your channel some too! I will be watching!

Thanks, glad you enjoyed. I'll try to cut out more of that dead space in new videos.

 

[foozelz]

So I looked at some of the videos and the audio is on point, I can hear you perfectly between you and the game audio. Voice is smooth and enjoyable to listen to!

I just finished watching the Rocket League video posted recently and a few other recent videos, and the issues I am seeing is that you aren't keeping a conversation up in the video. You seem like a very interesting person, but for a 22 minute video, it's feels more of just watching gameplay with a bit of commentary. I would suggest spicing it up by adding some life stories or talk about some recent events like movies or something that you can talk about for a bit to give the video some glow.

I would also suggest cutting the videos around the 10 minute mark, so you can leave you audience wanting more instead of the possibility of leaving early.

 

[Great 5s]

Thanks for the feedback. I'll be trying my best to cut out more useless stuff, and improve editing, and to bring up some more conversation.